With a truly well written poem, and for being a very original entry, Elizabeth takes home the title of Most Creative! We hope you have a bit more luck down at the pond than what’s portrayed in your poem, but if not initially, maybe buying some additional bait with some of your 100,000 coins will help! Congratulations Elizabeth, Playfish will contact you shortly so that you can claim your prize!
Amongst the rocks, the moss and fronds
three pets sat at the edge of the pond
each held a rod, so determined and tight
but alas, there was nothing
not a single bite.
“Blast these fish!” One pet cried
“We’re not gonna catch one,
no matter how hard we try!”
The second looked on
in an effort for a catch.
He jiggled his rod,
for just one little snatch.
“You’re right, it is hopeless!”
The second one wailed
“No matter how hard we work
we’ve always failed!”
But the third stayed still
deep in thought,
and after a moment, he pushed his brow taut.
“No matter then, friends,
there’s always tomorrow.”
So the three packed their things
and left for their burrows.
Later that night, the lottery was drawn
the third pet listened, and stifled a yawn.
“Three, four, sixty nine and eight”
The third’s eye’s widened-
it must have been fate!
While the last number was formally announced
the third pet waited, in his seat he bounced…
The next morning the old pets, one and two;
Arrived at their pond but looked lost and confused.
For instead of the third pet, they found a large truck
but after a moment, reality struck.
As the truck backed towards the pond
frightening the critters, and squishing the fronds.
At the sound of its horn
it tipped all its goods.
Bountiful fish galore!
The two pets stood in awe
they had never seen so many fish before!
The third pet arrived with a smile of glee
“Our problems are over, can you see?
I won the million, and remembered the fish
so I thought I’d grant our common wish!
I bought these fish to put in our pond
So we have something to catch
while we sit in the fronds!”
And so amongst the rocks, the moss and fronds
three pets sat at the edge of the pond
each held a rod, so determined and tight
but this time, there was something!
The fish, they’d bite!
Tags: coins, competition, creative, million, pet society, runner-up
August 8, 2009 at 8:35 am |
Good job! Congrats!
August 8, 2009 at 8:42 am |
awesome poem…congrats! 🙂
August 8, 2009 at 8:47 am |
[…] Creative is Elizabeth with a very well written poem and a truck-load of fish which you can read here! Congratulations […]
August 8, 2009 at 8:48 am |
love it!
August 8, 2009 at 9:25 am |
Wow! wonderful! excellent! thoughtfull! happy! interesting and very very fun to read! WELL DONE!
August 8, 2009 at 9:48 am |
ha ha ha – loved it! very cool story arc and poetry! congratulations from me and Oinky x
August 8, 2009 at 10:33 am |
congratzz 😀 😀
August 8, 2009 at 11:09 am |
Good poem… I should buy them next time!
August 8, 2009 at 1:26 pm |
So much creative! =) Congratulations!
August 8, 2009 at 3:00 pm |
Congratulations, Elizabeth!
The poem is cute 🙂
August 9, 2009 at 2:18 am |
Congratulations, Elizabeth!
What a lovely poem! You deserve it!
August 9, 2009 at 2:49 am |
awesome! very skilled, deserved the win!
August 9, 2009 at 2:58 am |
Well done….Congratulations!
August 9, 2009 at 4:22 am |
congrats to you!
hb~
August 9, 2009 at 6:47 am |
luv how u copied it from the australian lottery advert.
August 10, 2009 at 12:42 am |
hate when I’m playing with my pet and when I enter the cafeteria or at the stadium I was short because the game is in maintenance! I was expecting more than 1 weeks to complete the maintenance and now at last I can not play again because my account is in maintenance! please do a good time!
Thank you for your attention
Sincerely: Carolina Quintana
August 10, 2009 at 9:58 am |
Good Job…. So creative….:D
August 10, 2009 at 11:27 am |
Hi girl your a good writer,you deserve the million for that entry….
August 10, 2009 at 9:45 pm |
Congratulations!!! that´s great!!
August 10, 2009 at 9:58 pm |
Firstly congrats!! Secondly that poem rocked! It was so good! Well done! ^-^
My pet Minuet says well done too! 😀 lol
August 11, 2009 at 12:00 am |
Congratulations, It’s really beautiful 😀
August 11, 2009 at 12:19 am |
wow, it is so cute!
August 11, 2009 at 12:54 am |
well done
August 11, 2009 at 1:56 am |
This is a good poem! I love it. Congratulation Beth! You deserve the 100,000 coins.
August 11, 2009 at 2:13 am |
Congratulations!!! cheers!!
August 11, 2009 at 2:23 am |
Hey… you could write books for children!… this was very interesting and nice to read!
congratulations and hugs!
August 11, 2009 at 3:07 am |
Congrats! Its so nice!
August 11, 2009 at 3:35 am |
congrats is right,well written!
August 11, 2009 at 5:49 am |
Pink and I love fishing – and your poem 🙂
August 11, 2009 at 5:55 am |
Me gustaría que los concursos y las noticias de los juegos, se pudieran ver en español tambien.
August 11, 2009 at 6:14 am |
You must have a hard time at the fish pond that gives you the thought and foundation of this creative poem. Happy Fishing ….. Congrats
August 11, 2009 at 6:27 am |
Nice going! Great poem! Congratulations!
August 11, 2009 at 6:27 am |
This is soo cute! I loved it! Congrats! 😀
August 11, 2009 at 6:33 am |
wow!! so good sia!!
August 11, 2009 at 7:00 am |
congrats elizabeth!!!! 😀
August 11, 2009 at 9:11 am |
wow! you are a great poet!
August 11, 2009 at 9:45 am |
a 100.000 times well deserved!!
August 11, 2009 at 10:06 am |
Wow that was awsome and you deserved it
August 11, 2009 at 11:01 am |
that is so sweet ^^
a deserving winner
August 11, 2009 at 11:22 am |
Ohhhhh thats a really nice poem with a message 😀 Well done. What you gonna spend you million on??? 😀
August 11, 2009 at 11:23 am |
Nah i don’t like it, It’s rubbish! Soz it just is
August 11, 2009 at 11:59 am |
beautiful 😉
August 11, 2009 at 1:59 pm |
Very creative poem!! I loved it!
August 11, 2009 at 2:48 pm |
awesome!!! great job ☺☻
August 11, 2009 at 3:53 pm |
Endearing poem-story. I like how the lottery winner decided to buy the fish and pour into the pond… So very kind… (but not very bright… LOL!)
Very entertaining piece to read!
August 11, 2009 at 4:25 pm |
There should be a link to their profile, I want to become friends with her. 🙂 lol
August 11, 2009 at 7:51 pm |
Very nice. I love poems. I write my owns too. 🙂 It was fantastic. Very inspiring.
August 11, 2009 at 9:50 pm |
Wow! What an exciting poem! I had a lot of fun reading it. (:
How very thoughtful and adorable.
Keep up the good work!
Look forward to reading more of your work. 😀
August 12, 2009 at 1:28 am |
Wow ELizabeth!!! Love the poem! So much creativity! Congratulations! I can see why you won that award! And I love the setting and the main idea. Good job! 🙂
August 12, 2009 at 3:35 am |
aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesome!
August 12, 2009 at 4:47 am |
soooo nice !
August 12, 2009 at 11:25 am |
give me one million coins in thepet society!please…….
August 12, 2009 at 11:38 am |
job well done
August 12, 2009 at 12:06 pm |
Well done! Yur stoy rox! I luv the story. Congrats 4 winning the competition! I wonder how 2 add her? 🙂
August 12, 2009 at 12:21 pm |
wow! i really loved the poem .. n congratz elizabeth~ u really deserve it!
August 12, 2009 at 5:40 pm |
ahmmm nice one”” but no offense”” is that really a poem””
i thought i was reading a short story””
nways
goodluck!!!
August 12, 2009 at 8:28 pm |
nice poem i luv it n my nmes elizabeth 2 i made a poem but urs is way betta
August 12, 2009 at 10:45 pm |
lovedddddd your poem. a lot of inperation you have. very cute and lovley your poem. looking foward to reading more of your work!!
August 14, 2009 at 4:42 am |
That poem was really outstanding. I don’t have much time but just had to read the whole thing right to the last line. Very well done.
August 16, 2009 at 5:11 am |
Elizabeth is the best writer and teacher
ms Wok, you are great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
August 16, 2009 at 6:01 am |
a very nice poem =) i love it!!
August 16, 2009 at 6:03 am |
a very nice poem =) i love it!! awesome isn’t it?
August 16, 2009 at 3:03 pm |
que feoooooooooo so horrible hahaha yo i deveria should win ganar bobosssss looserr
August 17, 2009 at 10:50 am |
Loved the poem and so true, all Mitzy catche’s is junk to get recycled, lol. Well Done ~xXx~
August 17, 2009 at 12:50 pm |
wow nice poem . i really like that poem
August 17, 2009 at 10:04 pm |
Can translate it in spanish? Don´t undestand the poem.
August 18, 2009 at 12:13 pm |
Nice Poem
and
Grats for winning the contest Elizabeth 😀
you are the best
August 18, 2009 at 6:17 pm |
Well done Elizabeth, Congratulation!!!
LOL XXX
August 19, 2009 at 1:42 am |
So cool poem…I almost cried because I’m jelousy….Congrats!! it’s a huge hit !! 😀
August 21, 2009 at 10:08 am |
Cool poem, but did you get this idea from that add about the lottery on tv? Because it is exactly the same story as this, but with of course three old men.
September 7, 2009 at 5:26 am |
la la la. cool poem. la la la.
October 20, 2009 at 1:51 am |
you guys r soo lucky !! cool poems!!