Birthday Competition – Most Creative

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With a truly well written poem, and for being a very original entry, Elizabeth takes home the title of Most Creative! We hope you have a bit more luck down at the pond than what’s portrayed in your poem, but if not initially, maybe buying some additional bait with some of your 100,000 coins will help! Congratulations Elizabeth, Playfish will contact you shortly so that you can claim your prize!

Amongst the rocks, the moss and fronds
three pets sat at the edge of the pond
each held a rod, so determined and tight
but alas, there was nothing
not a single bite.

“Blast these fish!” One pet cried
“We’re not gonna catch one,
no matter how hard we try!”
The second looked on
in an effort for a catch.
He jiggled his rod,
for just one little snatch.

“You’re right, it is hopeless!”
The second one wailed
“No matter how hard we work
we’ve always failed!”

But the third stayed still
deep in thought,
and after a moment, he pushed his brow taut.
“No matter then, friends,
there’s always tomorrow.”
So the three packed their things
and left for their burrows.

Later that night, the lottery was drawn
the third pet listened, and stifled a yawn.
“Three, four, sixty nine and eight”
The third’s eye’s widened-
it must have been fate!
While the last number was formally announced
the third pet waited, in his seat he bounced…

The next morning the old pets, one and two;
Arrived at their pond but looked lost and confused.
For instead of the third pet, they found a large truck
but after a moment, reality struck.

As the truck backed towards the pond
frightening the critters, and squishing the fronds.
At the sound of its horn
it tipped all its goods.
Bountiful fish galore!
The two pets stood in awe
they had never seen so many fish before!

The third pet arrived with a smile of glee
“Our problems are over, can you see?
I won the million, and remembered the fish
so I thought I’d grant our common wish!
I bought these fish to put in our pond
So we have something to catch
while we sit in the fronds!”

And so amongst the rocks, the moss and fronds
three pets sat at the edge of the pond
each held a rod, so determined and tight
but this time, there was something!
The fish, they’d bite!

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72 Responses to “Birthday Competition – Most Creative”

  1. ChocolateMilk Says:

    Good job! Congrats!

  2. chandra Says:

    awesome poem…congrats! 🙂

  3. Birthday Competition Winners Announced! « Pet Society’s Blog Says:

    […] Creative is Elizabeth with a very well written poem and a truck-load of fish which you can read here! Congratulations […]

  4. Ivy Says:

    love it!

  5. Someone Says:

    Wow! wonderful! excellent! thoughtfull! happy! interesting and very very fun to read! WELL DONE!

  6. Hana Says:

    ha ha ha – loved it! very cool story arc and poetry! congratulations from me and Oinky x

  7. emmamelissa Says:

    congratzz 😀 😀

  8. ("LiFeEnDeRz") Says:

    Good poem… I should buy them next time!

  9. Beatriz Says:

    So much creative! =) Congratulations!

  10. oumsker Says:

    Congratulations, Elizabeth!
    The poem is cute 🙂

  11. Maegan Says:

    Congratulations, Elizabeth!
    What a lovely poem! You deserve it!

  12. cat Says:

    awesome! very skilled, deserved the win!

  13. txgirl Says:

    Well done….Congratulations!

  14. Harleyblues Says:

    congrats to you!

    hb~

  15. Gothy77 Says:

    luv how u copied it from the australian lottery advert.

  16. Aquario (asi se llama mi mascota Says:

    hate when I’m playing with my pet and when I enter the cafeteria or at the stadium I was short because the game is in maintenance! I was expecting more than 1 weeks to complete the maintenance and now at last I can not play again because my account is in maintenance! please do a good time!

    Thank you for your attention

    Sincerely: Carolina Quintana

  17. Miley Kiley Says:

    Good Job…. So creative….:D

  18. joahua Says:

    Hi girl your a good writer,you deserve the million for that entry….

  19. Carolina Says:

    Congratulations!!! that´s great!!

  20. Chantal Says:

    Firstly congrats!! Secondly that poem rocked! It was so good! Well done! ^-^

    My pet Minuet says well done too! 😀 lol

  21. Nona Says:

    Congratulations, It’s really beautiful 😀

  22. Milena Says:

    wow, it is so cute!

  23. libby Says:

    well done

  24. Azuzu Says:

    This is a good poem! I love it. Congratulation Beth! You deserve the 100,000 coins.

  25. Anna Leung Says:

    Congratulations!!! cheers!!

  26. JuanKa de Chile Says:

    Hey… you could write books for children!… this was very interesting and nice to read!

    congratulations and hugs!

  27. Kirsten Ness Says:

    Congrats! Its so nice!

  28. bluessue67 Says:

    congrats is right,well written!

  29. Anne Smyth Says:

    Pink and I love fishing – and your poem 🙂

  30. Sherezabe Says:

    Me gustaría que los concursos y las noticias de los juegos, se pudieran ver en español tambien.

  31. PurpleJam Says:

    You must have a hard time at the fish pond that gives you the thought and foundation of this creative poem. Happy Fishing ….. Congrats

  32. Beigie-Girl Says:

    Nice going! Great poem! Congratulations!

  33. Bluebell Says:

    This is soo cute! I loved it! Congrats! 😀

  34. Jia Rong Says:

    wow!! so good sia!!

  35. Nicole Says:

    congrats elizabeth!!!! 😀

  36. Elizabeth Says:

    wow! you are a great poet!

  37. Jozaine Hermelijn-Wall/ Divana Says:

    a 100.000 times well deserved!!

  38. Purpl3starz Says:

    Wow that was awsome and you deserved it

  39. Violet Says:

    that is so sweet ^^
    a deserving winner

  40. Teodora Says:

    Ohhhhh thats a really nice poem with a message 😀 Well done. What you gonna spend you million on??? 😀

  41. ladygaga-is-brill Says:

    Nah i don’t like it, It’s rubbish! Soz it just is

  42. fina Says:

    beautiful 😉

  43. Diane Says:

    Very creative poem!! I loved it!

  44. hahaha Says:

    awesome!!! great job ☺☻

  45. Linda Laughs Says:

    Endearing poem-story. I like how the lottery winner decided to buy the fish and pour into the pond… So very kind… (but not very bright… LOL!)

    Very entertaining piece to read!

  46. Bianca Says:

    There should be a link to their profile, I want to become friends with her. 🙂 lol

  47. Phoe Says:

    Very nice. I love poems. I write my owns too. 🙂 It was fantastic. Very inspiring.

  48. Celia Says:

    Wow! What an exciting poem! I had a lot of fun reading it. (:
    How very thoughtful and adorable.
    Keep up the good work!
    Look forward to reading more of your work. 😀

  49. Sarah Blueberrypie Says:

    Wow ELizabeth!!! Love the poem! So much creativity! Congratulations! I can see why you won that award! And I love the setting and the main idea. Good job! 🙂

  50. meg Says:

    aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesome!

  51. Ayeshna Says:

    soooo nice !

  52. Chii Chobitys Claryn Says:

    give me one million coins in thepet society!please…….

  53. Catherine Says:

    job well done

  54. Clara Says:

    Well done! Yur stoy rox! I luv the story. Congrats 4 winning the competition! I wonder how 2 add her? 🙂

  55. aysh Says:

    wow! i really loved the poem .. n congratz elizabeth~ u really deserve it!

  56. quacky Says:

    ahmmm nice one”” but no offense”” is that really a poem””
    i thought i was reading a short story””

    nways
    goodluck!!!

  57. Elizabeth Says:

    nice poem i luv it n my nmes elizabeth 2 i made a poem but urs is way betta

  58. Ana Beatrix Says:

    lovedddddd your poem. a lot of inperation you have. very cute and lovley your poem. looking foward to reading more of your work!!

  59. Carol J Hess Says:

    That poem was really outstanding. I don’t have much time but just had to read the whole thing right to the last line. Very well done.

  60. yenyen Says:

    Elizabeth is the best writer and teacher

    ms Wok, you are great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  61. miyha Says:

    a very nice poem =) i love it!!

  62. miyha Says:

    a very nice poem =) i love it!! awesome isn’t it?

  63. vaeria Says:

    que feoooooooooo so horrible hahaha yo i deveria should win ganar bobosssss looserr

  64. Val Says:

    Loved the poem and so true, all Mitzy catche’s is junk to get recycled, lol. Well Done ~xXx~

  65. may Says:

    wow nice poem . i really like that poem

  66. Mary Says:

    Can translate it in spanish? Don´t undestand the poem.

  67. JiaZhi Says:

    Nice Poem
    and
    Grats for winning the contest Elizabeth 😀
    you are the best

  68. Phiphi Says:

    Well done Elizabeth, Congratulation!!!

    LOL XXX

  69. Audra N Says:

    So cool poem…I almost cried because I’m jelousy….Congrats!! it’s a huge hit !! 😀

  70. J.Bocky Says:

    Cool poem, but did you get this idea from that add about the lottery on tv? Because it is exactly the same story as this, but with of course three old men.

  71. abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz Says:

    la la la. cool poem. la la la.

  72. Ropck-Princess Says:

    you guys r soo lucky !! cool poems!!

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